9 Simple Ways To Make Your Travel Blog Better

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Travel Writing Tips for Travel Blogs

For months now, I’ve been traveling the blogophere seeking out the interesting, the obscure, the obscene from the world of travel bloggers.

Good lord, there’s a lot of us out there. Seeing so many blogs, it’s natural that I’ve developed a marked preference for certain characteristics.

Even though I have absolutely no editorial “cred” other than my reading habits, I’m going to scribble a brief rundown of what catches my eye and what makes me click away.

There’s truckloads of text out there on how to write about travel, but hey, what’s stopping me from adding to it? These are my opinions only (I have plenty of those!) so take it for what it’s worth, my two cents, etc.

Make it physically readable, for starters.

I can’t read pink text on a yellow background, for example. And sometimes, wow, there is so much going on that I can barely find the text. Which leads me to…

Minimize the design toys, please.

Everyone wants a custom blog, but if you don’t really know what you’re doing, you just end up with noise. There are plenty of perfectly acceptable templates to use, it’s not a crime to use them, especially if you’re a good writer. I want to read you, not hire you as a designer.

Reading itineraries is really boring, unless they’re mine.

I skip right over blogs that list where the writer went without telling me anything about what happened there. These things get hidden in entries – first we went to the Museum, then the park, then we took the subway back to the old part of the city…. Meh. Doesn’t tell me anything. What did you do, see, eat there?

Turns out I do want to see a picture of you, who knew?

I love the surprise of seeing that some big dude in a Hawaiian shirt and a silly hat is writng culturally sensitive stories about visiting holy sites. Or some hard core outdoor climber is a woman of a “certain age.”

Speaking of pictures, bring ‘em.

It’s nice when there are thumbnails in the posts, or a single photo up top, and then, after reading, I can click through to an album. I don’t care for it when people use a linear blog format for photoblogs, however, there are better ways to present photos only. If you’re keeping a photoblog, use a tool that’s designed for it, not one that’s designed for text.

Negativity can be okay as long as it’s not cultural imperialism.

“Oh my god, I ate the most disgusting thing ever!” is all right as long as it’s followed by a description of what the thing was and how it’s a local specialty and how you had the nerve to try it. Props to you for being adventurous. Just don’t diss the locals, man.

Too much introspection?

“I was thinking about my friends back home and how they were so not having this experience that was totally changing me and everything is different now…” Click. Next please. I get that travel can equal huge transformation, but I’d much rather read about how that transformation is being experienced.

Is that too woo woo to make sense? Maybe. Maybe you get what I mean. Ditto for irony and uber-coolness. What’s the point in traveling if you’re going to spend too much time inside your own head instead of what’s happening in front of you?

Gimme the details!

I absolutely want to read about how the waiter looked like he was wearing his Grandmother’s wig, that his hair could so not have been real, or how the train station smelled of cigarettes and pee and oddly, roses. Good travel writing doesn’t miss the little things hovering in the corners in the background.

Take me with you.

This is difficult to define and quantify, but good travel writing makes the reader feel like they’re on the trip too. Put me in the car, on the bus, next to you on the plane. I really want to be there, so take me with you. No, seriously, take me with you. I can be ready to go in, like, 20 minutes.

What are some other criteria that make a great travel blog? Are there any amazing travel blogs you’re following right now?


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About the Author

Pam Mandel

Pam Mandel is a freelance writer and the travel editor for BlogHer. She blogs about travel, seafood, the ukulele, and more at Nerd's Eye View.

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  • Darren Cronian replied on December 13, 2006

    Great article! Thanks! :-) Great tips, and some I’ll be introducing myself.

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  • ianmack replied on December 13, 2006

    Hi Darren, thanks for stopping by. Glad you found the travel blog tips useful.

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  • Mick Gordon replied on December 14, 2006

    Interesting observations – I will keep them in mind when posting. Mick

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  • Melissa replied on January 2, 2007

    great tips. I can surely use some of them.

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  • Amanda replied on May 17, 2009

    Great article – truthful and helpful! Thanks

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  • Jan Ross replied on July 24, 2009

    I’m still working out the kinks of writing a professional travel blog. I have to make the posts interesting and try to incorporate my own travel experiences but also make the readers want to book a trip with my company to that location.

    Also, I am not a travel agent and have so much to learn about the travel business – this is really a learning process.

    Thanks for the tips!!

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  • Dave replied on September 22, 2009

    “It’s nice when there are thumbnails in the posts, or a single photo up top, and then, after reading, I can click through to an album.”

    Interesting suggestion…..I’ll have to think about how I can incorporate *small* photo albums into posts. I’ve been experimenting with creating little ones of my best photos for a city or region using http://sosauce.com

    It wouldn’t take much to embed a slideshow or add a link.

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  • Jill replied on February 10, 2010

    Agreed. Thanks for all the great info. My husband and I are entering month 2 of blogging about our adventures on the road. We’ve found we can stay a bit more sane, if we relax and focus on producing materiel our friends and family enjoy. It’s a delicate blend of facts and candor.

    There are some really great travel blogs to be discovered. It’s nice to know that so many of us have hit the road.

    Take care
    Jill

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  • Johnny Vagabond replied on February 10, 2010

    Whut?! No irony?! I am soooo in trouble… ;)

    Great tips here, thank you. I, too, really like the thumbnail idea. I’m going to wait for rtwdave to figure it out, then steal it from him.

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  • Chris - The Aussie Nomad replied on February 10, 2010

    Great tips Pam I’ll be sure to take note as I progress with my blog. One other thing that turns me off is great slabs of text.

    Add a picture and break down the paragraphs. It’s true that as readers we skim and if all I see is a great slab of text then its adios amigo.

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  • Andi replied on February 10, 2010

    Fantastic tips–couldn’t agree with you more!!! I will definitely keep these in mind as I post in the future. :)

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  • Abbey Hesser replied on February 11, 2010

    Great perspective, Pam! Especially about spending too much time inside your head. It’s funny how we do that when we’re traveling for long periods of time.

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  • Ryukyu Mike replied on February 14, 2010

    Thanks for this. I started a Forum post on this topic under Travel Writing and Photography ‘cuz somehow, I missed this piece. Throw some more at us Pam, if you have time ! LINK’d, now so everyone comes here.

    Cheers,
    Mike

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  • Masai mara replied on February 22, 2010

    Just be reading how you write, one can learn alot about blogging. I think the key to blogging is giving it a personal touch. Yeah having a conversation with your audience not talking at them. Well i wish it was as easy coz if myself suck at blogging. then there are those days when you wonder wat do i write now? lol

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